Disclaimer: The below-expressed emotions and experiences are not that of mine, they have been gathered by constant observation.
Bye bye, my whiskey and wine
Will catch up with you some other time
There was a time you made me high
Now, not even one pint is fine
You cured my cold and fever
And even made me feel better
I loved you with my pickle and frimes
But you didn’t give me back a dime
You were my precious
And you taste delicious
You were not a headache
Felt better than a cupcake
You smelled sexy with the likes of Pepsi
You made me sing
and you made me dance
You were worth taking a chance
But now
You might ask
Have you been alright
I have been trying to take another shite
And thinking, why can’t I be fun
Without puking my wine
So now, it’s time to save the time
And say
Bye bye my whiskey and wine
Will fuck with you some other time
P.S. I know the song doesn’t even make sense but I am trying to be a better writer, but I guess, I can’t 😛
Oh! Never say that. Just that you even consider writing poetry, puts you in an elite class called: Arteest :0) You should have seen my poems for years after I attempted to make them. Boy did I ever suck the big one! What I realized in time, since you mention that beneath all things is a pattern, so to with poetry. There’s a lot between the lines! BTW, your choice of topic is excellent! It always does my heart good when I see someone choosing to change their lives for the better. It’s not easy yet well worth the effort. It also inspires others to attain similar goals. So, a wise decision! It doesn’t even make sense? It makes “perfect” sense. Thank you for sharing your plight and victory over it. Refreshing read :0)
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I am glad you find it refreshing 😀 not everyone says the same. Thank you for your kind words
P.S. Its all about blood and sand (now this is where you should try to read between the lines) 😉
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really enjoyed keep going..
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Thanks 😅
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Appreciate your disclaimer. I have tried and now am just observing and am saddened by the hold hard drink has had on a few of my friends. Well written.
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Haha 😂 thanks
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Phenomenal! I can relate!!! 😉
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Haha, thank you 😀
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Thank you 😂
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My pleasure.
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🙂
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Yummy! Even to this guy who is over three years sober. I cans smell that honey, Jack!
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Haha 😂 3 years huh! That’s great!
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I read your prose over several times, and decided… I don’t have to completely get your meaning to appreciate your thoughts. It’s catchy, and that made it worth a 2nd read. Highest and Best!
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Haha, thank you 😂
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You are very welcome. Highest and Best!
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I know this one sucks! 😂 But you are so sweet. I assure you, I will try to do better next time 😛
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LOLOL. You did great! 🙂
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I can understand 😂 you don’t have to console me 😛
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It wasn’t an effort to console you, I guess I should have just said I liked it. 🙂
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Haha 😀 oh yeah!
P.S. It’s okay, you can abuse me if you want 😛
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😊
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Good one!😂😂
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Look who’s back! 😀
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I’ve always been here.😜
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Looks like, I wasn’t. It feels great to be back! 😀
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I know right!😁
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🙂
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